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Never make fun of an Acherra..

Published: Jun 29, 2010

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"Haha Nafi slowly you should know that you cant make fun about me!"
"Hey.. Kharun? Do you remenber? This is the place we first met each other... haha I remind I fall over you 8D"
"Oh my dear.. these was.. is so typically for you haha "</b>

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Wow ;m ready xDD Okay i like this one.. even though the background doesnt look like I want it..
naa... Im to tired to write much... Q_Q
Sorry guys!

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kayoshkia

Jul 5, 2010

Overall

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The expression of the characters are fitting for the story to go with it, and they set the mood for the image effectively. I like this.
I also like the the colouring on the characters, and equally I like the colouring on your background, although it seems poorer than the one on your characters.

The main problem with this drawing is that it feels disjointed.

and I think thats because of the scaling of the characters against the background.
Adding a light source to your trees and checking the constancy of the light source(S) and it/their direction against the characters too would help. A little more influence from the background bar the few tufts of grass.

The figures themselves are well drawn for what they are and the communication between them is clear and expressive. I love the direction of the tufts on the figure standing but why hasn't gravity taken affect to the mane of the lion underneath?

I don't really know what else to say about this image other than the fact Its enjoyable but feels flat.
All aside,Good work!